Really interesting story that you have used for you’re final piece. The narrative skills of how you have retold this story and the history, has really drawn me into the narrative. Brilliant
love the music, really lends to the narrative. well told and the soundscapes really bring it out. are there any photo’s to complement the project?
Great and interesting project. You should continued with audios for future! Love the background sounds, how they interact with the story. Well done, keep it up!
Really nice response for the task, the audio you have included works so well, it enhances the experience of the narrative being told and made me think of the eras that you are talking about.
You tell this story well. The pauses and added sound bites make this a great radio story great soundtrack Could easily be on a radio with further stories. Think you’ve found a real talent here and should continue with this method of story telling. Images could be used but i do like the blankness allowing the audience to fill with their minds eye.
Amazing story, really well told and easy to listen to. The use of just sound leaves it to you to imagine to scene.
That was wonderful, you’re a fantastic storyteller and the added sounds really helped along the narrative. Really enjoyed it!
Really good and descriptive, i think maybe sometimes abit to descriptive but still i think it worked well, i enjoyed listening to it. But i feel maybe some images would have been nice just so there was something to visually connect to. Other wise it was fantastic. welldone
Beautiful story was surprised to see no images but after hearing it, it didn’t need them. A really well written and narrated story give her the degree now
very sweet story Jenni. Good control with music to create small intermissions. i want you to read to my granpappy.
Wow Jenni, this is great story-telling! Theres loads of room to expand on this subject as well, I’d like to see/listen to anything you develop from it. It makes me want to know exactly how much you knew about his family, what parts are fact and which fiction? I’d also love to see photos! Well done!
Excellent Jenny! i really enjoyed it, the story really kept me hooked all the way through, it would be great on the Radio! I can see as a chapter of the story each day where people get hooked to it and come back the next day to hear the next section. The end is great as well, what a twist. I love how you wait until the end to reveal that the story is almost entirely Fictional. Great stuff, i wish i had time to say more!
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